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A king loses everything:
his land, his riches, his queen,
his value.
He falls victim to his own caste system,
from perfection to problematic,
a pauper of pride and penny.
He weeps, begs, pleads with his god,
and dies of exposure to the variables
that he once truly believed
he could control.
This probably isn't complete yet.
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friskyrahul Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
amazing
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AnUndefinedRomance Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Everybody lives, and eventually, dies. The ones who make our lives a living hell end up with their own sort of hell later. Some call this "karma".


In the fourth line, did you mean "castle"?
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costello7 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009
i like this, really good idea
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KnockMeOut Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No matter if it's complete or not, I really like it a lot.
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